Kitsch

I find this to be a nice photography, but, as always, it could be better. The first thing that gets my attention is that the hair is covering the "wing" of the make-up on her eyes, it looks a little bit asymmetric. Maybe you could have also given the model more space in the frame. This way all the hair would have fit inside.
On the other side, I love the softness of the image. The hair looks very natural, and the touch of color of the lips was an inspired thing to do. Also, her expression and the two different colored hair ribbons make her look childish and funny - which is good <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>