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:iconanekdamian:
This photo is particulary good among the rest of your shots. It has some sort of hidden power provoqued by the use of the focus and the sharpening of the eyes.

The slight offset of her face from the center of the photo is a plus; wheter it was intentional or not.

In general terms, for me, this is a good picture from you, yet i feel it a bit safe, because of the simetry of the composition. You could play a bit more whit the angles and positioning of your objective and with the poses of the model.

I think she could work a bit more on the intensity of her expresion. Her eyes could be stronger without losing the relaxed feeling of the shot. She looks a bit "expressionless" to me.

I think the garments she's wearing are cute and appropiated for the context she is at. Again, whether that was intentional or not.

I would like to see more of this shots. Maybe a bit less "indie" and more focused on creating a stronger impact on the viewer, even with "relaxed" concepts.
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:iconamelia-madeleine:
I look scary!

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:icongenabubbles:
You look gorgeous!

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:iconanekdamian:
You look quite different from the rest of your shots. And i think that's a good thing. Not because u look bad in the rest of ur pics [you're gorgeous], but because that's a useful thing when modeling, 'cause u can portray different characters and personalities to match the photographer's vision and deliver great photos :)

(sorry if it bugs you that i answered to your comment :blushes:)

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:iconamelia-madeleine:
No thankyou, that's awfully nice :)

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